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Parcel (unfinished) - Page 10/28 by algenpfleger Parcel (unfinished) - Page 10/28 by algenpfleger
Hey!

So I've decided to upload this unfinished manga-styled comic that I did earlier this year. It's an idea that was quite close to my heart at the time and that I needed to get off my chest. However, working it out and turning it into a short story took two months and during those two months my life transformed a lot (due to unrelated factors) and what happened was that before I was done I had lost all connection to it - I still felt the story, but while when I had started working on it I had this urge to get it out, two months later I really needed to leave it behind in the process of growing as a person. Now I look back at it and think how terribly sappy and emotional and cheesy it is, but I know how much it meant to me at some point, so I will share it for everybody who might currently be in a phase where they can connect to it.

The ending is slightly rushed and the whole thing is missing background inks and screentones, but all the core elements are there. So please read it if you're interested, and let me know what you think or if it induced some feels.


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aniwablue Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, well draw!
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Edarneor Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I dont get it, how come the girl opens the door twice?? in page 7 and 10??
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GeeHALE Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
It's a different scene...
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Edarneor Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
then why is the man visiting her second time?? i dont get it 0_o
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GeeHALE Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
to pick up another parcel. that's the whole point I guess, she decided to keep sending the parcel to het home so he can pick it up from her. Because she likes him.
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Edarneor Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
well there's nothing in the text that indicates it's ANOTHER parcel.. how are we supposed to know this? O___O
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GeeHALE Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
hahah you're funny! Well, there are scenes in between pages 7 and 10, so that shows that it's a different time and the parcel didn't happen one after another.
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Edarneor Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Well, there's not a single one about how she GETS another parcel...
actually there's not much of a plot anyway for me to complain.. looks like just random pages stitched together
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GeeHALE Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
ok...
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Eniat Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Wahaha this entire page is filled up with so much cute!
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