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Parcel (unfinished) - Page 14/28 by algenpfleger Parcel (unfinished) - Page 14/28 by algenpfleger
Note: Again this might not be obvious since parts of this would have been finished during the screentoning process. She's scanning, retouching and printing a failed delivery notice and then writing "Eriksen" in the recipient field.



So I've decided to upload this unfinished manga-styled comic that I did earlier this year. It's an idea that was quite close to my heart at the time and that I needed to get off my chest. However, working it out and turning it into a short story took two months and during those two months my life transformed a lot (due to unrelated factors) and what happened was that before I was done I had lost all connection to it - I still felt the story, but while when I had started working on it I had this urge to get it out, two months later I really needed to leave it behind in the process of growing as a person. Now I look back at it and think how terribly sappy and emotional and cheesy it is, but I know how much it meant to me at some point, so I will share it for everybody who might currently be in a phase where they can connect to it.

The ending is slightly rushed and the whole thing is missing background inks and screentones, but all the core elements are there. So please read it if you're interested, and let me know what you think or if it induced some feels.

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0-Nika-0 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist
Even if I didn't really relate to the story, I really liked reading this comic :)
It is really well drawn and the way you use different perspectives makes it interesting!
DenzelAJackson Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
this page especially looks really smooth and fluid. lovely work
JohanneLight Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I am so relating to this. I wanna read more.
MartaValentin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think almost everybody feel this way sometimes in live. Hope getting all this feeling out helped you to focus in life. Artist need to express this kind of things in their own way. I'm willing to read the rest of it! :)
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