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Parcel (unfinished) - Page 5/28 by algenpfleger Parcel (unfinished) - Page 5/28 by algenpfleger

So I've decided to upload this unfinished manga-styled comic that I did earlier this year. It's an idea that was quite close to my heart at the time and that I needed to get off my chest. However, working it out and turning it into a short story took two months and during those two months my life transformed a lot (due to unrelated factors) and what happened was that before I was done I had lost all connection to it - I still felt the story, but while when I had started working on it I had this urge to get it out, two months later I really needed to leave it behind in the process of growing as a person. Now I look back at it and think how terribly sappy and emotional and cheesy it is, but I know how much it meant to me at some point, so I will share it for everybody who might currently be in a phase where they can connect to it.

The ending is slightly rushed and the whole thing is missing background inks and screentones, but all the core elements are there. So please read it if you're interested, and let me know what you think or if it induced some feels.

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putridCheese Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I don't know the life of a freelance this is a pretty exciting read for me.
Lazybunnyluv Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
no next page :( .. i actually got into it, cant wait to see more!!
bigpoppamike Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
im actually really liking it. keep it up
Quinchols Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
some thing exiting is abou to happen!!!!!! I like it a lot! why dont you finish it?? at least the story :)
algenpfleger Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
The story is finished, I have the 28 pages together and will upload it all <3
AKS9 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
cool! i feel hooked already and cant wait to see how it goes on. and i can relate to the girl already, her spoiled thoughts and everything.
Zaphk Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   Digital Artist
That's pretty much my life from the beginning of this year until now haha
Plus, I'm not even sure anymore if I'll be able to work with the stuffs I want and be a great artist anytime soon. Meh, must keep trying, I guess.
Thanks for sharing this story ♥ I can't wait to read more!
flyaccountant Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Zolaida Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   Digital Artist
I actually really like it so far- it got my attention and even though it's unfinished, that barely bothers me. It's easy to read, would love to see where this goes.
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