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Parcel (unfinished) - Page 6/28 by algenpfleger Parcel (unfinished) - Page 6/28 by algenpfleger
Hey!

So I've decided to upload this unfinished manga-styled comic that I did earlier this year. It's an idea that was quite close to my heart at the time and that I needed to get off my chest. However, working it out and turning it into a short story took two months and during those two months my life transformed a lot (due to unrelated factors) and what happened was that before I was done I had lost all connection to it - I still felt the story, but while when I had started working on it I had this urge to get it out, two months later I really needed to leave it behind in the process of growing as a person. Now I look back at it and think how terribly sappy and emotional and cheesy it is, but I know how much it meant to me at some point, so I will share it for everybody who might currently be in a phase where they can connect to it.

The ending is slightly rushed and the whole thing is missing background inks and screentones, but all the core elements are there. So please read it if you're interested, and let me know what you think or if it induced some feels.


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:iconnucleararbitor:
NuclearArbitor Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
opening the door and the next tab is: [link]

fits surprisingly well.
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:iconinori-sama:
Inori-sama Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Oh! Neuer Nachbar, neues Glück? :D
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:iconpayuki:
payuki Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student
looking forward to read the rest
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Shinji-Kakaroth Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute angle in this and previous page! ^_-
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KizUna-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
so far I like it :) ich mag voll deinen "manga"zeichenstil - sehr ansprechend :) und ich finde es hat nen interessanten style dadurch das alles noch skizzenhaft ist (bg's usw.) - mir gefällts so :)
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Rurichin Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Are you not uploading the rest? : (
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:iconalgenpfleger:
algenpfleger Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I will be, just a bit busy atm :3
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:iconrurichin:
Rurichin Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Thank you! : )
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:icondxrhym:
DxRhym Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Really into this comic, sketchy or not, it definitely feels professional.
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:icontinhan:
tinhan Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ahhh!!! I am so excited for the next page!!!!
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:iconpyrink:
Pyrink Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
I though I'd never get to see "Spark" girl's face...Anyway:
I think this is the start of a good setup, it's relatable, we've all felt the wheight of daily life. I find this to be the beginig of a self-definig story, the way we try to gain identity through our occupation & how we use this as a tool to integrate (or separate) to society.
I think you could reconnect with this story if you mke this firts part just one piece of the puzzle.
Hope you find creative satisfaction in it to propel you.☺
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Quimeras-Y-Nahuales Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   General Artist
*A* reaaaallly??!!! u need to keep uploading pages, this is wonderful!! this is so well done!! tks 4 this!!
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Caoscreator Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Ok, im curious about the whole thing, i like the rythm you are following; no rush so far, and its a cool and normal character a bit lonely. im really interested to know where are you going.

So, Whos there?
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:iconchaosshade:
chaosshade Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait to read more ^^
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:iconjoes-16:
JoeS-16 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Please continue, if you will :)
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:iconeristhe:
Eristhe Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Can't wait for the next page! xD
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Beatrix-White Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
great comic! I can't wait to read more :)
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YurikohYamaky Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I really like the story, even though it's just so little. The fact that it's close to what I want to be is really pulling me in and pretty much tells me what might happen to me in the future. Something I should be ready for.
Please don't stop here.
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Narchise Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was so furious when i clicked for the next page and it wasn't there >:(
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InkedSilver Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's amazing thus far. It's wonderfully told and paced and I can't wait for more!
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VinceMute Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student
Hey man, this looks pretty good. The narrative is solid, and your drawings are pretty good as usual.
I think you should give comics a shot you know, not necessarily with this project. It could be a nice
change of pace, and I believe your fans around here would buy it and all that.
Stay cool, and I hope to see the rest of the drafts
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CaitlinSuarez Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I really like it! I can't wait for the next page. I'm sure the story only gets even better as it goes on. :D ((hugs))
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SarahSoak Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is there anything in the world you can't draw? :D
Your storytelling is just awesome! I love to read it and want to know what's happening next. :3
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Thildou-chan Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I wanna know who is behind the door :))) !!
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keksteig Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
awwwww wanna know what will happen =.=
*curious*
ah and your style is amazing :D
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Jio-Derako Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think this is the part where you upload your "terribly sappy and emotional and cheesy" manga, and everybody absolutely loves it. =D
Seriously though, as much as I can understand the feeling of looking back on something and thinking it's silly, this looks really good so far. Your art style is great for it, and certainly, this is only a little part of the story, but I think it's very nicely laid-out.
Looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
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DirkLoechel Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
This looks like the beginning of a very interesting story. Love your style. Captures the feel and perspectives of a typical Manga, and I'm rather curious where this would go.
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black-marten Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's unexpectedly good. Love the details
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:icongicee:
GIcee Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
oh man, I'm really excited for more!
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:iconzyden:
Zyden Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I want to see more =O
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Tanoshiix3 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Told ya people'll like it :D (including me) I can totally relate to how the girl feels like nothing exciting ever really happens.
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kuivran Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like it this far! Can't wait to see more of it!
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:iconflyaccountant:
flyaccountant Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
EHH !!!
OPEN THA MAIL ALREADY !!! !EH TAAAHAHAHAH

going crazy out of my mind here !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hikari651 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! I've read all the pages you uploaded! I really really love the way you draw! ♥
WHO IS BEHIND THAT DOOR? I am too curious >//<
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